in the breach of the surf upon the lava

04:10 Feb 18, 2015
English to Spanish translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / short story
English term or phrase: in the breach of the surf upon the lava
This was the wooing of Keawe; things had gone
quickly; but so an arrow goes, and the ball of a ri-
fle swifter still, and yet both may strike the target.
Things had gone fast, but they had gone far also, and
the thought of Keawe rang in the maiden’s head; she
heard his voice in the breach of the surf upon the lava,
and for this young man that she had seen but twice
she would have left father and mother and her native
islands. As for Keawe himself, his horse flew up the
path of the mountain under the cliff of tombs, and the
sound of the hoofs, and the sound of Keawe singing to
himself for pleasure, echoed in the caverns of the dead.
He came to the Bright House, and still he was singing.
He sat and ate in the broad balcony, and the Chinaman
wondered at his master, to hear how he sang between
the mouthfuls.
Es un fragmento de "The bottle imp" the robert louis stevenson. Muchas gracias.
YamiTissandie
Argentina


Summary of answers provided
4 +1en el murmullo de las olas al romper en la orilla
José Maria Ortega Flores
3donde rompen las olas contra los bajíos [creados por la lava]
JohnMcDove


  

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en el murmullo de las olas al romper en la orilla


Explanation:
es una posibilidad

José Maria Ortega Flores
United Kingdom
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  JohnMcDove: Creo que es bastante libre, pero suena literario "à la Stevenson"... :-)
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  -> muchas gracias John;-)
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
donde rompen las olas contra los bajíos [creados por la lava]


Explanation:
Donde rompen las olas contra los bajíos

en los bancos de arena creados por la lava solidificada donde rompen las olas...

Supongo que esto estará ya traducido... pero como opciones, te incluyo las anteriores...

Saludos.

JohnMcDove
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