Could you edit my grammar.
English translation: We're all for women thinking for themselves so that they may learn to rely on themselves.
| 07:17 May 18, 2005 |
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|  Selected response from: Nick Lingris United Kingdom Local time: 09:28 | |||
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| could you edit my grammar. We promote and support women's... Explanation: We promote and support women's active participation in thinking [about what?], so they may become able to rely on themselves in the future. |
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35 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1| could you edit my grammar. thinking for themselves / self-reliant Explanation: We promote and support women in thinking for themselves, in being / becoming self-reliant/self-sufficient in the future |
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38 mins confidence:
| could you edit my grammar. We encourage . . . self-reliant Explanation: We want to encourage women to join in brainstorming and blue sky thinking, to help them become more self-reliant in future. |
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2 hrs confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1| could you edit my grammar. We promote and support women's participation in decision-making... Explanation: We promote and support women's participation in decision-making so that they may eventually become self-reliant. |
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3 hrs confidence: peer agreement (net): +4
peer agreement (net): +4| could you edit my grammar. We're all for women thinking for themselves so that they may learn to rely on themselves. Explanation: Short and sweet. |
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