20:36 Nov 15, 2004 |
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO] Tech/Engineering - Accounting | ||||
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| Selected response from: Robert Donahue (X) | |||
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED | ||||
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5 +3 | considered/thought of as |
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5 | This employee replacement . . . |
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4 | slight change |
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4 | This employee replacement shall not be deemed AS A premature termination of Contractor agreement |
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3 -1 | Not really ;-) |
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slight change Explanation: This employee replacement shall not be deemed premature termination of the contract. |
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Not really ;-) Explanation: This employee replacement will not necessarily lead to premature termination of Contractor agreement. |
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This employee replacement shall not be deemed AS A premature termination of Contractor agreement Explanation: If you want to use "to be deemed", as in your original phrase, you will need to add 'as a". Alternatively, Michel's phrase is a good one. I hope it helps, Neil. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 25 mins (2004-11-15 21:02:19 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- This employee replacement shall not be deemed AS A premature termination of THE Contractor\'S agreement -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 26 mins (2004-11-15 21:03:26 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- we need a definite article (the) in this case as it talks about a \'unique\' contractor agreement :) |
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This employee replacement . . . Explanation: . . . shall not be considered to an indication of, or basis for, premature termination of Contractor agreement. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 days 19 hrs 42 mins (2004-11-18 16:18:42 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Please read \"considered to be an\" in place of \"considered to an\" in the sentence above. |
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