Could you edit my grammar.
English translation: what does actually mean?
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| could you edit my grammar. see the corrections Explanation: It can be concluded that Miss Lenny, an American citizen, ID 1478-1478-145, is actually a daughter of Mr. xxx and Mrs yyy, was born on September 2, 1974 and resides at XYZ street, USA. |
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| could you edit my grammar. SEE Explanation: It can be concluded that Miss Lenny, nationality USA, ID 1478-1478-145, actually is a daughter of Mr. xxx and Mrs yyy, and born on September 2, 1974 and residing at XYZ street, USA. ----------- One can draw the conclusion that Ms. Lenny, a U.S. citizen residing at XYZ street USA, whose ID # is 1478-1478-145 and whose date of birth is Sept. 2, 1974, is in fact the daughter of Mr. xxx and Ms. yyy. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 29 mins (2005-04-06 10:23:15 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Note: My example is the second- I reposted the Asker\'s answer as reference. |
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peer agreement (net): +2| could you edit my grammar. what does actually mean? Explanation: I think you need to change "actually" which in my view is too colloquial for a written translation. But it is not clear to me whether "actually" means "she is the daughter of X and Y (as was claimed)" or "she is not the daughter of A and B (as has been claimed) but is in fact the daughter of X and Y". In the first case I would say: It can be concluded that Miss Lenny, nationality USA, ID 1478-1478-145 and residing at XYZ, is indeed the a daughter of Mr. xxx and Mrs yyy and was born on September 2, 1974. In the second case I would replace "indeed" with "in fact". |
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