17:08 Apr 8, 2008 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Internet, e-Commerce / retrieve password letter | |||||
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| Selected response from: Mark Berelekhis United States Local time: 12:33 | ||||
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4 +12 | I'd rephrase the whole sentence |
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3 +3 | effective immediately |
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5 | password is set |
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4 | going forward / from now on |
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going forward / from now on Explanation: or as you say, from now on -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 mins (2008-04-08 17:10:55 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I think your solution is fine ... |
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I'd rephrase the whole sentence Explanation: Not crazy about how it sounds, so I'd modify it a bit: "You will have the option of keeping this password or changing it to any other password of your choice." |
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