Far more than

14:15 Jan 22, 2016 

Personally, I would rather go with the first option. The second is repetitive with "personalized service" twice (which I in fact saw afterwards), unless you find another phrase, perhaps "sophistication"?. Regards. Let us see what others say.

13:46 Jan 22, 2016 

Let me see if I correctly understood. Trying not to change the whole structure of the original, these would be my tries:

-Offering far more than lavish facilities, and premiere culinary options on the most enticing beaches of Riviera Maya, our Karisma Gourmet Inclusive® experience invites you to indulge in unequalled luxury and personalized service.
-Far more than personalized service, lavish facilities and premiere culinary options on the most enticing beaches of Riviera Maya, our Karisma Gourmet Inclusive® experience is unequalled luxury and personalized service.

10:39 Jan 22, 2016 

The use of the ellipsis in your ST is also incorrect and the sentence it ends lacks a finite verb. It would be better if you began with "Our Karisma Gourmet Inclusive® experience ...", rather than sticking it in the middle, then the contrast between mere lavishness and the greater luxury it promises would be easier to make - grammatically, at least.

07:46 Jan 22, 2016 

something is missing here.

22:22 Jan 21, 2016 

Your suggested version seems to be saying that "Our Karisma Gourmet experienced invites you to indulge in x and y far more than lavish facilities and premiere culinary options do". If that isn't what is intended, you need to make clear how the first part of the sentence relates to the second, e.g. by saying "Offering far more than lavish facilities and ..., our zzz experience invites you ..." Otherwise the first part simply has no grammatical link to the second.

20:44 Jan 21, 2016 

The whole page has a translated feel to it, and I'd make a lot of minor changes, but there's nothing significantly wrong with the bit you mention. It's "on the beaches" rather than "in"