Unter dem Brennglas

English translation: Once put under the lens

12:43 Jun 6, 2015
German to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting
German term or phrase: Unter dem Brennglas
In a figurative sense, but I'm having difficulty getting my head round what is meant here. (To be perfectly honest, I'm having a problem getting my head around this entire sentence)

The article is about Johann Martin von Wagner who was the "art agent" of Crown Prince Ludwig in Rome.
He sent reports to Munich on which German-speaking artists currently in Rome were to be recommended to create commissioned artworks and which were not.

"Auf diese Weise gelang es Wagner, mittelbar steuernd auf den bayerischen Kunstbetrieb einzuwirken. ***Gleichsam unter dem Brennglas werden die Entscheidungs- und Entstehungsprozesse von "atelier-frischer Ware" für den Primärmarkt in ihrer zwar um Fairness bemühten Abwägung, aber auch in all ihrer Subjektivität ud Zufälligkeit nachvollziehbar."
Lesley Robertson MA, Dip Trans IoLET
Austria
Local time: 20:49
English translation:Once put under the lens
Explanation:
Once put under the lens, the evolvement of straight-out-of-the-studio artwork and the decision-making (processes) that entailed …becomes transparent in all its subjectivity and..
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Michael Martin, MA
United States
Local time: 14:49
Grading comment
Thank you Michael.

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Summary of answers provided
4beneath a magnifying glass/looking glass
Alan Johnson
3 +1under (his) scrutiny
Wendy Streitparth
3 +1Once put under the lens
Michael Martin, MA
3under the/his microscope / magnifying glass
Helen Shiner


  

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beneath a magnifying glass/looking glass


Explanation:
Gleichsam unter dem Brennglas - as if beneath a magnifying glass/looking glass

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Note added at 11 mins (2015-06-06 12:54:16 GMT)
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Although fairly literal, this may be a starting point for you.

Alan Johnson
Germany
Local time: 20:49
Native speaker of: English
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under the/his microscope / magnifying glass


Explanation:
Brennglas is magnifying glass literally translated, but the first suggestion may be a more normal EN expression.

The sentence details other things he investigated; I.e. The other things that came under his magnifying glass.

Helen Shiner
United Kingdom
Local time: 19:49
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 275
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under (his) scrutiny


Explanation:
Furthermore, ....... fell under his scrutiny.

Wendy Streitparth
Germany
Local time: 20:49
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Edwin Miles: Or "came under his scrutiny" Either way, scrutiny is what occurred to me first.
20 hrs
  -> Thanks, Edwin
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Once put under the lens


Explanation:
Once put under the lens, the evolvement of straight-out-of-the-studio artwork and the decision-making (processes) that entailed …becomes transparent in all its subjectivity and..

Michael Martin, MA
United States
Local time: 14:49
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 16
Grading comment
Thank you Michael.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Lonnie Legg: Keeps the metaphorical meaning w/o overemphasizing the technical.
17 hrs
  -> You expressed it well. That's always my approach.
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