einen neuen Rahmen geben
English translation: Offering you a new showcase [shop window]
| 09:53 Jun 24, 2020 |
| German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Business/Commerce (general) / Marketing language | |||||||
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|  Selected response from: Lancashireman United Kingdom Local time: 00:13 | ||||||
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We take you out of the box Explanation: (We) expand your horizons -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 22 mins (2020-06-24 10:15:05 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Or better: Think/Look out of the box |
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It's your time to shine! Explanation: Another option to get the ball rolling. This is a really rather free take on the German, and I'm not sure how much leeway you've got to work with! That said, presuming the gist of the rest of the German document is essentially "exhibit at our trade fair, please!", I'd be tempted to go for a direct call-to-action statement rather than sticking too closely to the German. Of course, once we've found out what type of trade fair it is, there might be scope for a catchy little statement that's even closer to the products/sector in question - which would be ideal! |
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We custom frame your products. Your products in a new light. Your products in focus. A new look at y Explanation: Sorry, I suppose I could go on and on...if I knew the products concerned, I could give you a perfect fit. But I think one of these will do well. |
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53 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +3
peer agreement (net): +3| Wir geben Ihnen einen neuen Rahmen Offering you a new showcase [shop window] Explanation: Rahmen = framework in which to present your goods = showcase OR shop window I would omit wir/we' in the EN heading. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2020-06-24 11:44:36 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- It's KOK again, isn't it? In which case, I suppose it's yet another wordplay, in which Rahmen means fireplace surround https://www.fireplaces4life.co.uk/fireplaces/fireplace-surro... Alternative suggestion (though I think it sounds rather forced in EN): Offering you a new fireplace surround |
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