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brings [them] a great deal closer to Explanation: "Them" being the Oracle databases, in this case. |
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taking (Oracle databases) a big step closer Explanation: "XXXX programmed the DB LiveMonitor, taking Oracle databases a big step closer to the perennial goals of high availability and high performance." |
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forging [databases] a big leap ahead Explanation: ...forging Oracle databases a big leap ahead in the enduring goals of.... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 hrs (2020-05-31 16:10:59 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- forge ahead: to suddenly make a lot of progress with something https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/forge-ah... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 hrs (2020-05-31 16:27:37 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- You could also say: "...offering [them] a major advance...", for example... |
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taking huge strides (towards achieving...) Explanation: so that Oracle databanks are taking huge strides towards achieving their (relentless) goals for ... |
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gets us a lot closer to Explanation: I would say -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 9 mins (2020-05-31 05:05:45 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- to enabling etc. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2020-05-31 05:08:20 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- wouldn't be poaching would you? -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 14 mins (2020-05-31 05:09:56 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- anyway ok and gl -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2020-05-31 09:13:59 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- or "that comes a lot closer to etc." as an alternative -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2020-05-31 09:26:24 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- keeping it neutral... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2020-05-31 09:36:22 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- or: is/represents a great/major step forward in etc. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 hrs (2020-05-31 09:38:54 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- couple more ideas for you to juggle around with... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 22 hrs (2020-06-01 03:50:12 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- or: is much more in line with etc. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 22 hrs (2020-06-01 03:51:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- a more idiomatic rendering... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 22 hrs (2020-06-01 03:54:24 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- and you will obviously have to rework the phrasing but might be ok |
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