20:08 Jan 16, 2015 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Cosmetics, Beauty | |||||||
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3 | this elixir for your washing machine |
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3 | laundry elixir |
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3 | (magic) laundry potion |
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2 | gentle touch laundry detergent |
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dieses Wäsche-Elixier this elixir for your washing machine Explanation: The elixir can also be added to your washing machine when you put on a load of washing. It is absorbed by the clothing which then holds this extra strength in its fibres and protects us each time we wear it. http://www.allergiesandcfs.com/lets-talk-health/crystal-esse... The client will be disappointed if you shy away from using 'elixir' in the copy. Re the second Wäsche in the sentence: laundry |
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laundry elixir Explanation: ...this laundry elixir provides comfortably soft and fresh clothing -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 53 mins (2015-01-16 21:02:26 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I stand corrected: makes your clothing comfortably soft and fresh. |
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(magic) laundry potion Explanation: If the client likes elixir, garment/laundry potion won't be far off the mark either.. |
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gentle touch laundry detergent Explanation: Most people couldn't tell elixier from stale beer, so it's always a good idea to use vocabulary that rings a bell. |
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