09:25 Jan 29, 2020 |
German to English translations [PRO] Marketing - General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters / trade fair | |||||||
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4 +2 | Getting started with a home upgrade |
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4 +1 | Building Improvements for Beginners |
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3 +1 | start of renovation |
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3 +1 | Launching renovations |
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start of renovation Explanation: I would suggest "start of renovation". https://www.stadt-blumberg.de/fileadmin/data/blumberg.de/PDF... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2020-01-29 09:38:00 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- https://www.stadt-blumberg.de/fileadmin/data/blumberg.de/PDF... |
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Building Improvements for Beginners Explanation: This appears to be the name of a feature at the trade show, where those interested in starting building improvement/renovation projects can receive advice from exhibitors, along with a "Starterhilfe-Folder". See reference for more details (p. 8). Reference: http://presse.messe-wels.com/pressetexte/espa/2019/Pressemap... |
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Launching renovations Explanation: I assume it's supposed to sound attractive -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 56 mins (2020-01-29 10:22:34 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Launching (renewable) energy renovations -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 5 hrs (2020-01-29 15:21:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Another option, thanks Steffen, Launching your energy (efficiency) upgrade |
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Getting started with a home upgrade Explanation: or 'Getting started with home improvements'; 'Upgrading homes: first steps'. I like 'upgrade' as it is often used in the context of increasing energy efficiency which is what this trade show is about. I don't think there's any focus on novice customers and "launch" is too specific for our purposes. Also, the English equivalent would probably be less formal than the German in this context. |
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