05:39 Dec 19, 2013 |
Italian to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting | |||||
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4 | like a spiderweb [..all together contribute to] stir profound emotions |
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3 | take visitors on a magical carpet woven by... |
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take visitors on a magical carpet woven by... Explanation: I would stick with the carpet, put the emotions elsewhere in the phrase and threaten to strangle the author. |
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like a spiderweb [..all together contribute to] stir profound emotions Explanation: reword the whole paragraph!! Distaccati dal testo e utilizza la metafora della ragnatela. in a good exhibition, like in a good web site, if the plot is weaved and the strings are pull well, you obtain the desire structure/emotions. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 13 hrs (2013-12-19 19:25:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Verdi ... definitely a lot of emotions |
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