sicurezza d'impostazione

English translation: the assertiveness of its composition

14:26 Aug 4, 2014
Italian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting
Italian term or phrase: sicurezza d'impostazione
Describing a painting:

L'opera si contraddistingue per la sicurezza d'impostazione basata su tre elementi: un lungo porticato degradante che richiama la pittura metafisica di De Chirico e un improbabile palma blu che lo separa dalla presenza parziale ma ugualmente incombente della mitica Topolino che invade la scena.
PamelaTh
Local time: 21:09
English translation:the assertiveness of its composition
Explanation:
I think that the term 'boldness' here might have the wrong connotations in the context of describing art, as bold can also refer to the colours (which would indicate that they are bright or vivid) or lines (indicating they are thick or strong) that make up this composition, whereas it seems from the excerpt that the term 'sicurezza' refers more to the strong, confidently executed composition itself as a whole, and here I think the terms 'assertiveness' or 'assuredness' encapsulates this notion more clearly.
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Martina O'Leary
Ireland
Local time: 21:09
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Thank you everyone for the great suggestions.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1..for the confidence of its configuration
Tom in London
4 +1boldness of its composition
Lisa Jane
4its setting well-balanced
Inter-Tra
4the assertiveness of its composition
Martina O'Leary


  

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..for the confidence of its configuration


Explanation:
....per la sicurezza d'impostazione

There are many different ways to say this. Everything depends on the overall tone of your whole translation. My suggestion is only a pointer.

Tom in London
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agree  tradu-grace
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boldness of its composition


Explanation:
or bold composition.

I think in this context bold is fitting because I read it as there are these three strong, striking components which define the work-

and composition is a term which is well suited to an artwork whether a painting or scupture

Lisa Jane
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agree  philgoddard
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its setting well-balanced


Explanation:
another solution

Inter-Tra
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the assertiveness of its composition


Explanation:
I think that the term 'boldness' here might have the wrong connotations in the context of describing art, as bold can also refer to the colours (which would indicate that they are bright or vivid) or lines (indicating they are thick or strong) that make up this composition, whereas it seems from the excerpt that the term 'sicurezza' refers more to the strong, confidently executed composition itself as a whole, and here I think the terms 'assertiveness' or 'assuredness' encapsulates this notion more clearly.

Martina O'Leary
Ireland
Local time: 21:09
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
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Thank you everyone for the great suggestions.
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