sensibilità desonorizzata

English translation: subdued and poetical sensitivity

16:56 Mar 12, 2016
Italian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting / artistic sensibility
Italian term or phrase: sensibilità desonorizzata
I am struggling with the part in asterisks. Lots of reference to sound and music in the text preceding and following the term itself, but I'm a bit stumped as to what they mean here.

"Bianchi" is a series of works by the artist, Nuvolo (Giorgio Ascani).

All input appreciated!

"La topografia delle impronte serigrafiche alla nitro sui Bianchi rivela una naturalezza nel dominio dello spazio che viene, di volta in volta, qualificato da una equivalenza non tanto metrica quanto ponderale tra interventi cromatici e sfondi. La lezione di Mondrian e di Burri ha trovato in Nuvolo un interprete dei princìpi così dotato da saper ritagliare, tra il rigore cartesiano dell’olandese e la drammaticità epica e solenne dell’umbro, un’ulteriore zona di ***sensibilità desonorizzata*** e poetica, ma più profondamente lìrica. Larvali siti di immagini che fuoriuscenti da nebbie si mostrano e si negano, quelle dei Bianchi sono dodecafonie mature del repertorio di un pittore che è ormai in grado, a trent'anni, di armonizzare ogni brano spaziale."
Fiona Grace Peterson
Italy
Local time: 02:24
English translation:subdued and poetical sensitivity
Explanation:
As the opposite of loud, or of vehement...

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StefanoFarris
United States
Local time: 20:24
Grading comment
Although I'd probably use "sensibility" rather than sensitivity, this is probably the best fit. Thanks everyone!
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Summary of answers provided
2 +2silent awareness
Wendy Streitparth
3 +1subdued and poetical sensitivity
StefanoFarris
4soundless sensibility
James (Jim) Davis


  

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silent awareness


Explanation:
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Wendy Streitparth
Germany
Local time: 02:24
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8

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agree  Ana Claudia Macoretta
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agree  writeaway
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
subdued and poetical sensitivity


Explanation:
As the opposite of loud, or of vehement...



StefanoFarris
United States
Local time: 20:24
Native speaker of: Italian
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Although I'd probably use "sensibility" rather than sensitivity, this is probably the best fit. Thanks everyone!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  philgoddard: A good solution for a waffly text.
5 mins
  -> Thank you very much !
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soundless sensibility


Explanation:
Of course the normal translation for "sensibilità" is "sensitivity" but not for Jane Austen fans and it seems to fit this "poetic" context. Unfortunately sticking "poetic" in the middle ruins the alliteration unless you rearrange it a bit "poetic and soundless sensibility".
Of course what gets me is the way the Italian art critics try to outshine the artist with the erudition and poetry of their criticism.

James (Jim) Davis
Seychelles
Local time: 04:24
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 157
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