登録する際に既登録者の確認に基づいて登録が行われる

English translation: registration of ]a new membr] is based on confirmation by an already registered member

12:43 Feb 5, 2010
Japanese to English translations [PRO]
Law/Patents - Patents
Japanese term or phrase: 登録する際に既登録者の確認に基づいて登録が行われる
訳す前の解釈の仕方の問題です。
全文は以下の通りですが。

前記通信回線を介して前記第一の情報処理装置の前記入力部で入力した新規登録者を登録する際に既登録者の確認に基づいて登録が行われるとともに、その新規登録者が前記登録者と関連づけられて前記第二の情報処理装置にxxxの基礎データとして記憶されるシステム。

これを

前記通信回線を介して前記第一の情報処理装置の前記入力部で新規登録者を入力すると、既登録者の情報と確認した結果に基づいた登録が行われ、また同時にその新規登録者と前記登録者とのデータの関連づけが行われ、それが前記第二の情報処理装置にxxxの基礎データとして記憶されるシステム。

と解釈して訳していいでしょうか。特許関係なので一語一句忠実に訳すべきだとは思うのですが。。。

適切な訳例を教えていただければ幸いです。よろしくお願いいたします。
Yumico Tanaka (X)
Australia
Local time: 01:28
English translation:registration of ]a new membr] is based on confirmation by an already registered member
Explanation:
Based on the discussion, this really sounds like a social networking device...
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Michael Karpa
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Local time: 08:28
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3 +2registration of ]a new membr] is based on confirmation by an already registered member
Michael Karpa
3Registration process is based on the verification of new data against the data already registered.
Marta Kosmal (X)
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FYR
cinefil

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Registration process is based on the verification of new data against the data already registered.


Explanation:
I'm not sure but here's a few of my ideas. I hope it'll help you to figure something out.


Registration process is based on veryfing new data against the data (of patients) already registered.

New registration is based on verification against the already existing (patients') data.



Marta Kosmal (X)
Japan
Local time: 00:28
Native speaker of: Native in PolishPolish
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
registration of ]a new membr] is based on confirmation by an already registered member


Explanation:
Based on the discussion, this really sounds like a social networking device...

Michael Karpa
United States
Local time: 08:28
Native speaker of: English
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Reference: FYR

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http://www.freepatentsonline.com/6789078.html

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