08:08 May 9, 2010 |
Portuguese to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting | |||||||
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5 | the distance process is projected |
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3 +1 | the process of distancing is projected |
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4 | reminisces a process of the past or distancing |
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the distance process is projected Explanation: Yes, you are right; the text is very dense and full of the artsy presumption commonly found in description of works of art, as if the author were competing with the artist for attention. Sure, parts of the text are balderdash, but I understand that you need to translate it. Here is my attempt at reproducing the relevant sentence original, including its nonsensical parts, as far as possible: The panels are a record, a testimony of intention, which follow reactive contractions and surmised as a refuge in which the distance process is projected; not only the emotions but the very act of representing them -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 17 mins (2010-05-09 08:25:41 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Error: Sorry, I inserted the word "sentence" in the wrong place (darned editing boxes!). I meant to say ...reproducing the relevant original sentence, including... My apologies :-( |
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the process of distancing is projected Explanation: Not very high confidence level because I'm not sure about this since the Portuguese uses a noun rather than a verb. But it only really makes sense to me to turn it into a verb in English, since it is a process that we are talking about. - "a refuge into which the process of distancing OR the distancing process is projected". Anyway, it might help your ideas... |
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reminisces a process of the past or distancing Explanation: This is my figurative take on "se projecta o processo da distância", earlier on in the passage the panels are refered to as a record of something former, which presently is perceived as "a house" or "shelter". |
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