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Russian to English translations [PRO] Law/Patents - Law (general) | |||||||
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4 +1 | Lease Pledge Agreement |
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3 +1 | the pledge of contract rights under the lease agreement |
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the pledge of contract rights under the lease agreement Explanation: 22. Lease Agreement ("Договор аренды") 5 Договор залога прав по договорам (The Pledge of Contract Rights); http://docs.cntd.ru/document/822401008 |
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Lease Pledge Agreement Explanation: Я бы перевела "Договор залога прав по договору аренды" как "Lease Pledge Agreement", а "Залог прав по ДА" как "Lease Pledge". С желанием переводить каждое русское слово на английский надо бороться :) Вы же и определения терминов переводите? Пусть много слов будет в определении, в самом термине стоит их количество сократить. Юридические термины в английском вообще очень ёмкие, и этим нужно пользоваться. Из личного опыта - когда сложный термин/фраза в переводе превращается в X of Y of Z - нужно отматывать назад и искать варианты, в которых будет меньше слов. “Aircraft Lease Pledge Agreement” means the pledge agreement entered into between the relevant Group Companies and the Trustee on or about the First Issue Date regarding all Group Companies’ rights under any present or future aircraft leasing agreements entered into by any Group Company as lessor, which shall not be perfected unless and until an Event of Default has occurred." https://westatlantic.eu/wp-content/uploads/2019/05/Bond-Term... |
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