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Feb 5, 2009 23:34
15 yrs ago
Spanish term

fruncido resoplido

Spanish to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature modern novel
Voy pidiendo una pinta de Guinness y, mientras me quito el abrigo, observo al resto de una clientela formada por una nutrida representación escuterista —a los que saludo con el gesto universal del fruncido resoplido— y algunas familias británicas.

In an Irish bar, the narrator greets a group of scooterists he knows.
UK English, and thanks in advance.

Discussion

Juan Jacob Feb 6, 2009:
Eileen... pues de eso se trata...
Eileen Banks Feb 6, 2009:
Hola Juan y Kate - tal vez me inspiré demasiado! :)
Kate Major Patience (asker) Feb 5, 2009:
Gracias por la simpatía al menos Juan! :D
Juan Jacob Feb 5, 2009:
¡Uy, es que no lo entiendo ni en español! Conozco el ceño fruncido, pero no el resoplido fruncido. Esperemos gente más inspirada...

Proposed translations

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frowning snort

Another option.

Actually, I'm having trouble imagining what the "universal" greeting is when you see a group of fellow scooterists...

Does the guy purse his mouth and puff? Or frown and grunt?

I might go with "frowning 'hmph" if it seems by the context that there is disapproval or slight irritation in the sound he makes...

Equine Sounds
The snort sound is produced when a horse exhales through his nose with his mouth shut and produces a vibrating sound in the nostrils. Very often the horse ...
www.sportpolo.com/Polo_Pony/Sounds.htm

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"He gave the universal greeting of a frowning snort/grunt..." or "greeting of a frown and a grunt/snort".

Ranma frowned and snorted disdainfully. "Um . . . What about me?" asked Min timidly. Moiraine looked at her for a moment, then gestured her to come closer. ...
www.anime.sobhrach.com/~dragon/dp/dp3.txt

Jokingly they called him long-nose, and Rann frowned and snorted. "Hey!" he grunted playfully. Theira smiled a little as they let the taunka ...
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Subotai frowned and grunted, reminding himself that it was not wise to underestimate one’s enemy. Would waiting in the rain make the Romans ...
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Peer comment(s):

agree Andy Lowe (X) : "frowning grunt" sounds best to me.
2 hrs
Thanks for your input, Andy. :))
agree Modesta Rodriguez
19 hrs
Thanks, Celaya. :->
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37 mins

puckered grunt

You grunt softly, but I can see the grunt on your puckered and strained face as you swing your bag over your shoulder — a corner of the book peeking out of ...
www.hamilton.edu/magazine/2006/winter/theblinddate.html -

resoplido - snort ... fruncido - puckered... Somehow I can visualize the scene but ...

maybe this helps :)

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Thanks Kate :) I was even thinking that just grunt would do ...
Note from asker:
Hi Eileen.. I'm with you on this one, something like a grunt and a frown mixed together...
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2 hrs

panting gasp

Used in the text below

many texts with panting gasp....
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5 hrs

smirk/smirking gesture

might work...
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6 days

a gruff grunt

I can just picture it - no doubt a man of few words.

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sputtering frown

Since it's a universal greeting, it seems to me to be like the gesture that goes with the question: What are you doing here?
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