Dec 19, 2007 10:44
16 yrs ago
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the usage of "May"

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Greetings;

Is the usage of the word "May" in the below sentence correct? or would it be more accurate if I used it at the begining of every sentence after comma?

** May all hearts be filled with joy, all dreams come true, all pain and suffering be alleviated and all your prayers be answered. Wishing you and yours a happy Eid ul-Adha (the festival of sacrifice) **

Many Thanks

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sounds fine to me

IMO one instance of 'may' at the beginning is fine. I'd also put a comma after 'alleviated'.
Note from asker:
Thank you very much, Ken.
Peer comment(s):

agree Michael Powers (PhD)
1 min
agree Valentina Del Maestro : :-) yes
13 mins
agree Christo Metschkaroff : "May" at the beginning - Optative mode; Wish that ...
13 mins
agree Colin Ryan (X)
43 mins
agree Refugio : perfect, with the comma after alleviated
45 mins
agree rchan
1 day 7 hrs
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