Олена боязко зазирнула у прекрасні очі Спасителя: на мить її душа полинула ....

English translation: Olena trepidly looked into the eyes of the Creator; for a brief moment her soul plunged into the

13:39 Sep 22, 2002
Ukrainian to English translations [Non-PRO]
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Ukrainian term or phrase: Олена боязко зазирнула у прекрасні очі Спасителя: на мить її душа полинула ....
Олена боязко зазирнула у прекрасні очі Спасителя: на мить її душа полинула в Сяюче Безмежжя Його Вселенської Любові, а коли повернулася у тіло, Олена відчула у собі потужне джерело Світла, ні з чим незрівняне щастя сповнило її.
Alla_K
Local time: 01:45
English translation:Olena trepidly looked into the eyes of the Creator; for a brief moment her soul plunged into the
Explanation:
shining infinity of His universal/eternal love and when it returned Olena felt within herself a powerful source of Light and the most profound feeling of happiness eneveloppedher completely.

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Note added at 2002-09-22 19:33:35 (GMT)
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Savior, not Creator

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Note added at 2002-09-22 19:34:12 (GMT)
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Savio(u)r, not Creator
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Alexandre Khalimov
Local time: 00:45
Grading comment
Aleksandr! Thanks for the highly artistic translation from my friend, Ukrainian author, amd from myself.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1Olena trepidly looked into the eyes of the Creator; for a brief moment her soul plunged into the
Alexandre Khalimov
3 +1fearfully looked into the Saviors eyes...
Marta Argat


  

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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
fearfully looked into the Saviors eyes...


Explanation:
for a moment her soul...
Are there any problems?

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Note added at 2002-09-23 06:39:55 (GMT) Post-grading
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ouch! Savior\'s


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Note added at 2002-09-23 06:40:05 (GMT) Post-grading
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ouch! Savior\'s


Marta Argat
Local time: 08:45
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian, Native in UkrainianUkrainian
PRO pts in pair: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Alexandra Tussing
8 hrs
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Olena trepidly looked into the eyes of the Creator; for a brief moment her soul plunged into the


Explanation:
shining infinity of His universal/eternal love and when it returned Olena felt within herself a powerful source of Light and the most profound feeling of happiness eneveloppedher completely.

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Note added at 2002-09-22 19:33:35 (GMT)
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Savior, not Creator

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Note added at 2002-09-22 19:34:12 (GMT)
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Savio(u)r, not Creator

Alexandre Khalimov
Local time: 00:45
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
Grading comment
Aleksandr! Thanks for the highly artistic translation from my friend, Ukrainian author, amd from myself.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Vadim Khazin: What is "it" that returned?
45 mins

agree  Alexandra Tussing: it's fine, only it should "when her soul returned to the body" for clarity.
7 hrs
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