Jan 25, 2006 10:51
18 yrs ago
English term

help with decrypting a phrase please

Non-PRO English Tech/Engineering Engineering (general)
Could somebody put this phrase in plain english for me please?

Thank you very much!

My idea is that I need people who have a good engineering background, with ideally some oil field experience, who can operate as the writing /calculating /reporting counterparts to my good old style field hands who aren't so happy doing paper work.
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Jan 25, 2006 10:58: Tony M changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

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+8
7 mins
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help needed with documentation

The current, long-serving oil-field workers are not happy doing paper work, therefore the writer (advertiser?) needs some people with good engineering experience, preferably in oil fields, who can cooperate with the current workers and their writing, reporting and calculating work for them.

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Note added at 9 mins (2006-01-25 11:00:53 GMT)
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should read .... current workers and do their writing ....
Peer comment(s):

agree Tony M
2 mins
Thanks, Dusty, (:-|)> Bonjour
agree Jianming Sun
11 mins
Thanks (:-{)>
neutral Mike Delta : 42 word sentence - reading age equivalent 12th grade - plain English? Brit schools have Grades, Standard English - Grade 7 to 8. Plain English is halting prose Dave.
1 hr
as a Brit, in my day it was 1st to 6th forms, not grades (marks to us) - I tired to use simpler phrasing to convey the meaning - I wasn't aiming to do Cristian's job for him. Yes, it could be written in separate sentences like your rather halting answer.
agree Charlesp
1 hr
Thanks, Charles (:-{)>
agree Richard Benham
4 hrs
Thanks, Richard (:-{)>
agree cmwilliams (X)
5 hrs
Thanks, CM (:-{)>
agree conejo
6 hrs
Thanks (:-{)>
agree Alfa Trans (X)
8 hrs
Thanks, Marju (:-{)>
agree Jörgen Slet
10 hrs
Thanks, Jörgen (:-{)>
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you all!"
+5
9 mins

See explanation below...

I need people with engineering experience, preferably with some experience in oil-fields, who will be able to take care of the kind of work that involves the more intellectual activities of writing, calculations and report-writing, alongside my usual oil-field manual workers, who are not very good at these kinds of administrative and communication tasks.
Peer comment(s):

agree Dave Calderhead
12 mins
Thanks, Dave!
agree Tania Marques-Cardoso
19 mins
Thanks, Tânia!
neutral Mike Delta : 54 word sentence - reading age equivalent 12th grade - plain English?
1 hr
Not literature, but an expanded explanation... You're probably right, tho'
agree Richard Benham
4 hrs
Thanks, RB!
agree conejo
6 hrs
Thanks, Conejo!
agree Jörgen Slet
10 hrs
Thanks, Jörgen!
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+6
10 mins

I have an idea

My idea is to have people with engineering training (ideally with experience working in oil fields) to do the writing / paperwork for the regular fieldworkers who don't like to do this (paperwork).

one suggestion
Peer comment(s):

agree RHELLER : you have eliminated the most difficult words without changing the meaning
2 hrs
agree Richard Benham
4 hrs
agree cmwilliams (X)
5 hrs
neutral Mike Delta : 32 word sentence - reading age equivalent to 12th grade. Can you write your sentence as several sentences Armaat? If you write it as 2 sentences Armaat, I will tell you their reading age.
6 hrs
I thought it was plain English when I wrote it - straightforward sentence structure, no ambiguous words, no sarcasm. // Maybe 2 sentences, but I don't think the length is the problem as much as a couple of rather informal phrases in the source text.
agree conejo
6 hrs
agree Jörgen Slet
10 hrs
agree Seema Ugrankar
12 hrs
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+2
24 mins

Yes

I run a company an oil field.
My workers will not do my paperwork.

I need someone who has worked on an oilfield to do the paperwork for them.
If I can't get an oilfield worker, I'll take anyone with experience in engineering.

Phew, I can see why his workers will not do his paperwork.

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Note added at 5 hrs (2006-01-25 16:41:52 GMT)
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Is that what
you have changed the meaning - that is not translation//1) he never said "will not do paperwork" he said "aren't so happy"" 2) "good eng background" is not even close to "anyone w/exp in eng"- like telecommunications?building microchips?

means in Anerican English then Rita?
Peer comment(s):

agree Glenda Janssen
20 mins
agree Tony M : Yes, THAT's plain English!
1 hr
neutral RHELLER : you have changed the meaning - that is not translation//1) he never said "will not do paperwork" he said "aren't so happy"" 2) "good eng background" is not even close to "anyone w/exp in eng"- like telecommunications?building microchips?
2 hrs
Please explain exactly how I changed the meaning Rita.
neutral cmwilliams (X) : agree with Rita. It doesn't say the workers will not do it.
5 hrs
What does it mean when someone says, I 'don't wish to hurt your feelings' CM?
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