Apr 6, 2006 01:11
18 yrs ago
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Portuguese term
edupa
rendimento
Non-PRO
Portuguese to English
Marketing
Advertising / Public Relations
ad slogan, ad line
(of a jello brand)
"O MELHOR RENDIMENTO E O MELHOR SABOR AGORA NA MELHOR EMBALAGEM".
"O MELHOR RENDIMENTO E O MELHOR SABOR AGORA NA MELHOR EMBALAGEM".
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 -1 | best yield |
Paul Dixon
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| 5 +4 | best value |
Sormane Gomes
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| 5 +2 | best value for money |
Paula Góes
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| 3 | most economical |
Claudio Mazotti
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Proposed translations
-1
20 hrs
Paul Dixon
Brazil
Brazil
Native in Portuguese
&
English
Brazil
PT/EN Translator - ABRATES Certified
Native in: English (Variants: UK, British) 
, Portuguese (Variant: Brazilian)
Works in: Portuguese to English, English to Portuguese
Related KudoZ points
:
4
Selected
best yield
Another suggestion.
3 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Good call, Paul. Though I'm not sure this is quite it yet, rendimento in the context I am translating is definitely more along the lines of "best yield". I did get reference as to that sense (sec.edgar-online.com/2005/ 06/30/0001104659-05-030766/Section5.asp), but I feel that BEST YIELD is somewhat technical for an ad line for a jello mix (or is it?) I really appreciate your contribution though!"
19 mins
Claudio Mazotti
Brazil
Brazil
Native in Portuguese
Specializes in field
Brazil
my motto:professionalism and dedication.
Native in: Portuguese (Variant: Brazilian)
Works in: English to Portuguese, Portuguese to English
Related KudoZ points
:
13
most economical
perhaps it may help...
+2
8 hrs
Paula Góes
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in Portuguese
Works in field
United Kingdom
Awesome Brazilian Portuguese translator
Native in: Portuguese (Variant: Brazilian) 
Works in: English to Portuguese, Portuguese, Spanish to Portuguese
Related KudoZ points
:
4
best value for money
Pelo menos em UK! :)
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Note added at 8 hrs (2006-04-06 10:04:47 GMT)
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value (MONEY) Show phonetics
noun [C or U]
the amount of money which can be received for something:
She had already sold everything of value that she possessed.
What is the value of the prize?
The value of the pound fell against other European currencies yesterday.
Property values have fallen since the plans for the airport were published.
I thought the offer was good value (for money)/US ALSO a good value (= a lot was offered for the amount of money paid).
http://www.dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=87706&dic...
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Note added at 8 hrs (2006-04-06 10:04:47 GMT)
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value (MONEY) Show phonetics
noun [C or U]
the amount of money which can be received for something:
She had already sold everything of value that she possessed.
What is the value of the prize?
The value of the pound fell against other European currencies yesterday.
Property values have fallen since the plans for the airport were published.
I thought the offer was good value (for money)/US ALSO a good value (= a lot was offered for the amount of money paid).
http://www.dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=87706&dic...
+4
8 mins
Sormane Gomes
United States
United States
Native in Portuguese
&
English
Specializes in field
United States
Fully bilingual; pharm/med, among others
Native in: English (Variant: US) , Portuguese (Variant: Brazilian)
Works in: Portuguese to English, English to Portuguese
Related KudoZ points
:
4
best value
My suggestion.
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Note added at 12 mins (2006-04-06 01:23:28 GMT)
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Welcome to Malt-O-Meal
Then, we top them off with a light frosting featuring rich cream flavor and ... And with 50% More oatmeal in the package, it's the best value in hot cereal! ...
www.malt-o-meal.com/pages/whats_new.html - 20k
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Note added at 27 mins (2006-04-06 01:39:11 GMT)
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NOTE to EDUPA:
In English, especially in marketing terms, how much you get out of a product is by definition its value. “More Value for Your Dollar” is one of the oldest and most common product marketing terms in American English.
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Note added at 1 day41 mins (2006-04-07 01:52:41 GMT) Post-grading
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Best yield for an ad? for a punch line? Ask any native speaker and he or she will tell you what value means in this context. Oh well...Good luck with your translation.
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Note added at 12 mins (2006-04-06 01:23:28 GMT)
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Welcome to Malt-O-Meal
Then, we top them off with a light frosting featuring rich cream flavor and ... And with 50% More oatmeal in the package, it's the best value in hot cereal! ...
www.malt-o-meal.com/pages/whats_new.html - 20k
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Note added at 27 mins (2006-04-06 01:39:11 GMT)
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NOTE to EDUPA:
In English, especially in marketing terms, how much you get out of a product is by definition its value. “More Value for Your Dollar” is one of the oldest and most common product marketing terms in American English.
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Note added at 1 day41 mins (2006-04-07 01:52:41 GMT) Post-grading
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Best yield for an ad? for a punch line? Ask any native speaker and he or she will tell you what value means in this context. Oh well...Good luck with your translation.
Peer comment(s):
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edupa
: I'm not sure rendimento is along those lines. I feel that rendimento has more to do, for example, with how much food you can get when preparing a cake mix, or dessert etc, or how mcuh laundry you can do per box of detergent.
11 mins
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| agree |
David Hollywood
: or maybe "best deal" in marketing terms
4 hrs
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Thank you, David.
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| agree |
Emilie
4 hrs
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Thank you, Emilie.
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| agree |
Margarita Palatnik (X)
5 hrs
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Thank you, Margarita.
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| agree |
Osmar Jardim
: I fully agree as far as we are "translating" the word/expression and not "creating" a slogan, in which case the price would be another, of course (he he he)
12 hrs
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Thank you, Osmar.
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