Glossary entry

Spanish term or phrase:

El cuidado del entorno

English translation:

This environmentally friendly approach

Added to glossary by James A. Walsh
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Spanish term

cuidado del entono

Spanish to English Other Environment & Ecology Rice Production
This is from a Uruguayan newspaper article about rice production and environmental protection for bird life in Uruguay.

I understand the meaning here, but am struggling to find a natural sounding equivalent in English.

Here's the context:

"Los cultivos de arroz en el país utilizan procedimientos de producción amigables con el ambiente que se emplean para promocionar sus negocios en el exterior.

El cuidado del entono se destaca como una ventaja comparativa frente a otros países que usan mayor cantidad de químicos en la producción."

My effort so far:

"Uruguayan rice growers employ environmentally friendly production processes in order to promote their businesses abroad.

These common protective measures give them a comparative edge over other countries, who use more chemicals in their production processes."

Many thanks in advance. UK English please.
Change log

Jun 21, 2010 20:39: James A. Walsh Created KOG entry

Discussion

liz askew Apr 14, 2010:
Glad it worked out eventually:) There is nothing worse than being in a panic, having been there myself a few times. What we do to ourselves!
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
PS: Meant to mention — Thanks Deborah! I went with your wording in the end. 'This environmentally friendly approach...'. I also stole your 'competitive', to replace my 'comparative', so thank you!
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
Indeed, Patricia. Today was —most definitely— one of those days (because of the deadline). It was great to receive such a rapid response from everyone, and hats off colleagues for sticking to your guns!

I was slightly panicking actually, as I was coming from the standpoint that the customer is always right, given the term had supposedly been ‘confirmed’ via the end client, and all that jazz; so I just wasn’t thinking straight. Meanwhile, the clock was ticking away...

Good KudoZ indeed :) :)
SaludoZ
Patricia Rosas Apr 13, 2010:
what a great discussion... and how good of the ProZ colleagues to insist when their instincts told them that something was amiss!
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
Yes,am feeling rather sheepish about it all myself What really threw me was contacting the agency earlier, who 'confirmed' entonar with the client (of course, when I spoke to the client directly, they hadn't actually contacted him!).

Regardless, I should have been able to figure it out from the context (which seems so blatantly obvious now), but was in a bit of a flap earlier because of the deadline.

Again, thanks to one and all for your help. And yes, Jenni, lots of great translations to choose from! :)

Regards,

James
margaret caulfield Apr 13, 2010:
James, Oh yes! It certaintly exists in the sense of "intonation"! But not in this context. I'm glad you finally sorted it out with your client!
Jenni Lukac (X) Apr 13, 2010:
A wild goose chase, James but at least you have a lot of great translations to choose from!
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
Exactly.
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
It was a (darn) typo!! Have just spoken with the author, and he rather sheepishly informed me that it was indeed a typo. I should have contacted him in the first place... (or should've been able to figure it out without doing so). Sorry about that everyone. And thanks for your help.
Robert Forstag Apr 13, 2010:
The word "entono" still doesn't fit here.... ...as a noun. Think about the phrase "cuidado del entono." If you parse the meaning, I think you arrive at sheer nonsense. I think that "entono" here is a typographical error.
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
@Margaret: Verious dictionary references Babylon Spanish-English
entono (m)
n. intonation; being in tune, singing in tune

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entonar
v. intone, chant; sing; speak or recite in song-like tones; produce musical tones; modulate; sound; pitch

Larousse Compact Spanish-English

entonar
verbo transitivo
1. [cantar] to sing
2. [tonificar] to pick up
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verbo intransitivo
1. [al cantar] to sing in tune
2. [armonizar]
entonar (con algo) to match (something)

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This was published in a weekly newspaper magazine supplement, so it's unlikely (but not impossible) that this is a typo.
I actually have the name and contact number for the author, so I think I'm going to call him directly in Montevideo to ask him! Will let you know...
Jenni Lukac (X) Apr 13, 2010:
Having offered a "more holistic approach" in view of your client's comments about "entono / entonar", I'd like to share the only reference I could find to entono, that I found in Maria Moliner. I think the client has coined a new use. FYI for word buffs, Moliner gives: "entono - cualidad, situación o actitud de entonado" For entonado the book gives: 1"participio pasado de entonar(se) or as an adjective, 2"de elevada posición social, encombrado, 3 engreído u orgulloso, 4 pedante 5 borracho. With all those possibilities as a verb form or an adjective, why not launch a noun?
margaret caulfield Apr 13, 2010:
James, "Entono" as a word simply doesn't exist. All you have to do is read the rest of the sentence and you'll see how clear it is that this is "entorno", especially when it states that this is compared with other countries that use more chemicals in manufacturing. It simply can't be anything other than "entorno"!
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
Hmmm.... Yes, I'm now beginning to question my client's (an agency) query with the end customer...
Bubo Coroman (X) Apr 13, 2010:
what the client confirmed is really surprising given that "entorno" is often used synonymously with "medioambiente" and the phrase "cuadado del entorno" is extremely common -- 107,000 hits
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
nor can I find any hits for "cuidado del entono", only for "cuidado del entoRno" http://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=en&source=hp&q=cuidado del...
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
well, I can find no dictionary references for "entono" as a noun, only entoRno".
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
so
"entono" is a noun then? how strange
James A. Walsh (asker) Apr 13, 2010:
ENTONAR Hi Liz, that was my initial thought, but I contacted the client who confirmed it is the verb ENTONAR, as in, to sing from the same song-sheet, to sing in tune, to match, etc.
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
Hi
shouldn't it be "cuidado del entoRno"??
liz askew Apr 13, 2010:
Hi
shouldn't it be "cuidado del entoRno"??

Proposed translations

+4
6 mins

taking care of the environment

.....

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Note added at 9 mins (2010-04-13 14:22:02 GMT)
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or
just

caring for the environment

[PDF] Untitled
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Has a comparative advantage. ... caring for the environment by inspiring, informing, ... and international policies and programmes on environment and ...
timber.unece.org/fileadmin/DAM/meetings/04-unep.pdf
Peer comment(s):

agree teresa quimper
4 mins
Thank you, though the asker does not agree!
agree margaret caulfield
7 mins
Thank you, though the asker does not agree!
agree Andy Watkinson : If this isn't a type for "entorno" I'll eat my external hard drive!
1 hr
Well, I certainly wasn't going to eat mine. For once I was pretty sure!! Thank you!
agree RichardDeegan
365 days
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10 mins

This environmentally friendly approach gives them a competitive edge over other countries

it means "environmentally friendly" again, same as "amigables con el ambiente" which comes before - here the "entorno" means "el medioambiente"
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+1
13 mins

commitment to the environment

This commitment to the environment gives Uruguay a comparative advantage over other countries...
Peer comment(s):

agree Muriel Vasconcellos
4 days
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+2
3 mins
Spanish term (edited): El cuidado del entorno se destaca como una ventaja comparativa

Envirnomental protection emerges as a comparative advantage...

It looks like you left out an "r" in "entorno."

I think that this solution would work.

Suerte.

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Note added at 14 mins (2010-04-13 14:27:19 GMT)
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I still think this translation would work if the noun is indeed "entono". Or perhaps something like:

Environmental responsibility emerges as.....

Respect for for the environment....
Note from asker:
Hi Robert, please see my note to Liz in the discussion box. Thank you.
Peer comment(s):

agree David Burrows : I agree, it looks like a typo to me.
1 min
Thank you, David.
agree Carolina Brito
14 mins
Thank you, Britos.
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16 mins

maintaining the natural harmony

Taking entono to be to do with tones tunes etc.
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45 mins

(more) holistic approach

This answer is aimed at helping you solve your dilemma and is not meant as a criticism of the many great answers you have received. Based on what could match with your client's "entono" concept, I Googled Uruguay, organic farming, and various other key words and came up with the above. Examples: PDF] Organic Agriculture and Womens' Empowerment - [ Traducir esta página ]
Formato de archivo: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - Vista rápida
organic groups take a 'whole family' approach to empowering women and in ...... In Uruguay, the organic farming organisation APODU has not explicitly ..... organic farming risks becoming a marketing strategy more than a holistic attempt ...
www.ifoam.org/growing_organic/.../Gender-Study-090421.pdf - Similares; Exploring options for sustainable development of vegetable farms ... - [ Traducir esta página ]
Formato de archivo: PDF/Adobe Acrobat
context of vegetable farming in Uruguay, model-based land use studies should be .... Special thanks go to Ing. Agr. Luis Aldabe, your holistic view of vegetable farming ..... Analysis of future agricultural change; a farm economics approach ...... 3.2.4 Application: Prototyping a Dutch organic arable farming system ...
library.wur.nl/wda/dissertations/dis3446.pdf. The (more) is there because the text implies some non-organics chemicals are still used in the production being discussed. Good luck!
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