Tener comportamiento ejemplar

English translation: Take care to behave correctly

06:38 Aug 2, 2012
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Human Resources / Employee conduct
Spanish term or phrase: Tener comportamiento ejemplar
Obviously my term is very easy to translate, but the catch is that I need a translation which starts with "T" because this is part of the "STAR" method.

My text (which concerns employee conduct, especially contact with customers) is as follows:

Lo que se debe hacer
Implementar el método STAR.

Sonreír
Tener comportamiento ejemplar
Ayudar
Responder rápido

I'd be grateful for any ideas that would fit in with the above stating with "T", as I have drawn a blank.

Thank you!
Nikki Graham
United Kingdom
Local time: 15:04
English translation:Take care to behave correctly
Explanation:
Not sure about "behave correctly"; there may be a better way of putting it. Perhaps you could add "at all times", or something like that.

My idea here is:

(a) Ideally you want a verb, because the others will presumably be verbs. It says these are things you have to do, so you will probably say "Smile", "Assist" (?), "Respond" for the other three. Of course, if it suits you, you can rejig it and use nouns, but it would be neater to use one or the other for all four terms.

(b) Getting the T by saying "To do something" is a bit unsatisfactory, because it'll be obvious that you've only added "To" here for the sake of the T; otherwise, you would have put "To smile", To respond", and so on.

All the possibilities that occur to me are a bit forced, but then "Tener" is a little bit forced in the Spanish too.

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Note added at 3 hrs (2012-08-02 10:15:45 GMT)
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"Impeccably" was my first thought! I'm not sure why I didn't put it; it's actually pretty suitable, I think.
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Charles Davis
Spain
Local time: 16:04
Grading comment
Many thanks to everyone for your ideas. I decided to use this in the end, despite being a bit cumbersome, because I wanted a verb without to, and I also managed to fit this phrase in elsewhere in the text, so there was a nice link.
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1Tact
Erik Bry
3 +1To set/To lead by example
Gordon Byron
3 +1To show exemplary conduct
David Hollywood
3 +1Totally exemplary conduct
Mike Sadler (X)
4Take care to behave correctly
Charles Davis
3Take (the) initiative
James A. Walsh
3Top-rated/grade/quality conduct/behavior
Richard Hill


Discussion entries: 3





  

Answers


13 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
To set/To lead by example


Explanation:
Take the lead in being an exemplary..hmmm

Gordon Byron
Spain
Local time: 16:04
Native speaker of: English

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  David Hollywood: I like "to lead by example"
9 mins
  -> Thanks David, it seems more natural doesn't it?
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24 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Tact


Explanation:
Tact: a keen sense of what to do or say in order to maintain good relations with others or avoid offense


Erik Bry
Local time: 08:04
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Notes to answerer
Asker: Good idea, thanks. I'm considering tactful behaviour/conduct as a possibility


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Beatriz Zorron-Minhondo
6 hrs
  -> thanks smarty!
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38 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
To show exemplary conduct


Explanation:
just to add to the fray

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Note added at 41 mins (2012-08-02 07:19:42 GMT)
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I know I've had a couple of stabs at this but todqy I had a hole-in-one so suggestions in the light of serious celebrations

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Note added at 52 mins (2012-08-02 07:30:51 GMT)
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or: To demonstrate exemplary conduct/behavior

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Note added at 54 mins (2012-08-02 07:32:57 GMT)
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and as you're from the UK (as I am myself) "behaviour"

David Hollywood
Local time: 11:04
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 172

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Guadalupe Lynch: I agree
1 day 11 hrs
  -> thanks Guadalupe :)
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Totally exemplary conduct


Explanation:
Worth a punt

If I were in your shoes, I wouldn't be bothering though, adding a translator's note.

Mike Sadler (X)
United Kingdom
Local time: 15:04
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
Notes to answerer
Asker: Very nice. It seems that a translator's note won't be necessary with all the good ideas people have provided :-)


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  MollyRose: I like this because you don't have to use the infinitive (To _____), which doesn't fit in the structure of the list
14 hrs
  -> Kind of you to say so. Best of all, Nikki has plenty to go at now.
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Tener comportamiento ejemplar
Take (the) initiative


Explanation:
Not sure if this really fits the bill here, but it came to mind, so I thought I'd share...



    Reference: http://www.jobsearchonline.bc.ca/Job%20Maintenance/initiativ...
James A. Walsh
Spain
Local time: 16:04
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish
PRO pts in category: 48
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Take care to behave correctly


Explanation:
Not sure about "behave correctly"; there may be a better way of putting it. Perhaps you could add "at all times", or something like that.

My idea here is:

(a) Ideally you want a verb, because the others will presumably be verbs. It says these are things you have to do, so you will probably say "Smile", "Assist" (?), "Respond" for the other three. Of course, if it suits you, you can rejig it and use nouns, but it would be neater to use one or the other for all four terms.

(b) Getting the T by saying "To do something" is a bit unsatisfactory, because it'll be obvious that you've only added "To" here for the sake of the T; otherwise, you would have put "To smile", To respond", and so on.

All the possibilities that occur to me are a bit forced, but then "Tener" is a little bit forced in the Spanish too.

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Note added at 3 hrs (2012-08-02 10:15:45 GMT)
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"Impeccably" was my first thought! I'm not sure why I didn't put it; it's actually pretty suitable, I think.

Charles Davis
Spain
Local time: 16:04
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 68
Grading comment
Many thanks to everyone for your ideas. I decided to use this in the end, despite being a bit cumbersome, because I wanted a verb without to, and I also managed to fit this phrase in elsewhere in the text, so there was a nice link.
Notes to answerer
Asker: Bother, you are right. It should be a verb (yes, I had thought of assist), and I totally agree with you about using "to". Behave impeccably perhaps?

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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Top-rated/grade/quality conduct/behavior


Explanation:
Other options

Richard Hill
Mexico
Local time: 09:04
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 24
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