Aug 16, 2019 01:48
4 yrs ago
Portuguese term

omitiu seu relacionamiento

Portuguese to English Art/Literary General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters letter about someone having an affair
So I've translated this letter about someone's daughter going into a relationship, leading to a marriage and then a separation, written by the mother. I'm dealing with this text that's pretty ambiguous (wording changed due to confidentiality):

"Meu nome é XXX e sou a mãe de YYY. Minha filha omitiu seu relacionamiento como o ZZZ para mim. Para mim, fui informada sobre o relacionamento em [data]."

The issue is the use of "omitiu" and my first interpretation was "sacrificed (the [mother-daughter] relationship) for ZZZ." However, the client is claiming that the mother was saying that her daughter didn't tell her about the relationship with ZZZ (or say anything about having a a dating relationship), and asking to use something like "At first, YYY kept in secret the fact that she was dating ZZZ." Perhaps she may have intended to say so, I don't think that's faithful to the original. So I'm looking for other ideas.
Change log

Aug 30, 2019 13:02: Matheus Chaud changed "Field" from "Other" to "Art/Literary"

Discussion

Oliver Simões Aug 17, 2019:
Seth Hopefully, this will help you make up your mind (if you haven't already).

omitir: Deixar de dizer, mencionar ou manifestar um sentimento, uma vontade, uma opinião etc. [td. : No documento, omitiu alguns detalhes importantes] - http://www.aulete.com.br/omitir

omitir: deixar de dizer, escrever ou fazer algo em determinadas situações que era esperado, ou mesmo necessário, que se manifestasse. Omitir é deixar de lado, esquecer, preterir, silenciar, não mencionar ou esquecer. - https://www.significados.com.br/omitir/

An interesting discussion on the differences between "hide" and "conceal": https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/hide-vs-conceal.1451... (too long to post)

keep from: to not tell (something) to (someone)
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/keep from

Proposed translations

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concealed her relationship


Ex.:

The Dain Curse
https://books.google.com.br/books?isbn=147191769X
He said they concealed his relationship from the others because they did not want the girl's father...
Peer comment(s):

agree Leda Roche
2 hrs
Obrigado, Leda!
agree Nick Taylor : it works!
7 hrs
Obrigado, Nick!
agree Mark Robertson : Obviously
7 hrs
Obrigado, Mark!
agree Luiz Fernando Santos Perina
9 hrs
Obrigado, Luiz!
agree Gilmar Fernandes
11 hrs
Obrigado, Gilmar!
agree Liane Lazoski
1 day 58 mins
Obrigado, Liane!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
+5
2 hrs

never told me about it

Sugestão
Peer comment(s):

agree Nick Taylor : Nice!
4 hrs
Cheers, Nick!
agree Luiz Fernando Santos Perina
6 hrs
Obrigado, Luiz Fernando!
agree Gilmar Fernandes
8 hrs
Thanks, amigo!
agree Mark Robertson : Também dá.
9 hrs
Thanks, Mark.
agree Oliver Simões
1 day 9 hrs
Obrigado, Simões!
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+3
7 hrs

kept (the relationship with Z) from me

kept (the relationship with Z) from me until I found out in....
Peer comment(s):

agree Mark Robertson : Works too.
4 hrs
Cheers Mark
agree Oliver Simões
8 hrs
Thanks Oliveira
agree Mario Freitas : Yup, another good solution.
1 day 6 hrs
Thanks Mário
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+1
8 hrs

hid her relationship

Example sentence:

Proof that Kathryn Bernardo and Daniel Padilla never really hid their relationship.

Peer comment(s):

agree Mark Robertson : Também dá.
2 hrs
Obrigada, Mark!
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