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Which are examples of more effective developmental feedback?
Which are less effective?
Choose whether each piece of developmental feedback is more or less effective.
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Your report included errors and outdated information.
You should proofread it before sending it out.
On our project team call, you shared dates that have not been validated, resulting in a change to our timeline.
In the future, if you acknowledge that you are still confirming dates, this would avoid negative perceptions about your preparedness.
You seemed unprepared for your portion of the presentation.
During the meeting you hosted today, we only got through 2 of the 5 agenda items, as you allowed the team to discuss unplanned topics.
In future meetings, I suggest that you “parking lot” unplanned topics for the following meeting to ensure we cover all planned agenda items.
You should include our global colleagues in your emails as they may have some feedback.
Although this feedback highlights situation, action, result and alternative action it does not include the final step of STAR/AR feedback, the alternative or enhanced result that would come from taking the alternative action.