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English to Chinese translations [PRO] Social Sciences - General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters / general | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Kiet Bach United States Local time: 05:32 | ||||||
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5 | 破碎的系统 |
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5 | 殘破的制度;破碎的制度;破碎的體系 |
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4 +1 | 失敗的政策 |
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5 | 存在缺陷的制度 |
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5 | 不健全的制度 |
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5 | 不健全的系統 |
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破碎的系统 Explanation: 破碎的系统 |
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殘破的制度;破碎的制度;破碎的體系 Explanation: 我始終覺得,低收入供房是一種殘破的制度。 broken是一個負面意義的詞,“不健全”體現不出負面的色彩。 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1小时 (2020-09-26 17:11:10 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 畸形的制度如何?我覺得這個更接地氣,一聽就懂 |
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失敗的政策 Explanation: I have always felt that low income housing was a broken system. 我一直以來都覺得低收入房屋是個失敗的政策。 我一直以來都覺得低收入房屋是個失敗的構想。 system: an organized set of interrelated ideas or principles. https://www.thefreedictionary.com/system |
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存在缺陷的制度 Explanation: 我始终认为低收入住房制度存在缺陷。 system 在此处不宜翻成“系统” |
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不健全的制度 Explanation: housing n. the providing of houses and shelters 住房供给 low-income housing: 低收入住房供给 low income housing was a broken system 低收入住房供给是一种不健全的制度 |
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不健全的系統 Explanation: right 不健全的系統 垮掉了的系统,崩溃的系统 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 7 mins (2020-09-26 16:14:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 出了故障的系统、失灵的系统。 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 10 mins (2020-09-26 16:17:18 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- 残缺不全的系统,出了毛病的系统,无法起到应有作用的系统。 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 21 hrs (2020-09-27 13:12:46 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- broken就是没有起到预期的作用,需要修补、改革,那么,这个候选人打算在改革这个系统方面有所作为。如果要译为“失败”,可能会被选民认为这个候选人希望推动把低收入住房系统彻底废除。 下列网页证明了这个broken的系统是可以fix的。如果翻译为“失败的”,就是无法fix的了。 The low-income housing system is broken ... - News Breakwww.newsbreak.com › amp › samsung-daily The low-income housing system is broken. Designer Kia Weatherspoon wants to fix it. businessofhome.com | 5d. The low-income housing system is broken -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 days (2020-09-30 22:31:07 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- low income housing 就是一个系统,而不是一个policy 或一套制度。它是一套由政府 operate 的系统,有的地方有专门的局来管理这个系统。low income housing 中包含着一个“系统”所要求的所有要素。 |
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