Jul 7, 2021 16:11
2 yrs ago
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German term
entsprechende Eingrenzung
German to English
Medical
Medical: Pharmaceuticals
the text concerns correspondence about modifying patient information. the phrase concerns a sentence which must be reworded "die Angabe "andere Krankheiten" und "die nicht mit dem Prüfpräparat oder Ihrer Erkrankung in Verbindung stehen" ist keine entsprechende Eingrenzung".
Proposed translations
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Jul 7, 2021 16:29: Steffen Walter changed "Field (write-in)" from "Online Shopping" to "(none)"
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German term (edited):
keine entsprechende Eingrenzung
Selected
too vague, not specific enough
The full sentence is: 'Der Satz lässt immer noch zu viel Spielraum und ist umzuformulieren; die Angabe "andere Krankheiten" und "die nicht mit dem Prüfpräparat oder Ihrer Erkrankung in Verbindung stehen" ist keine entsprechende Eingrenzung.'
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Note added at 4 hrs (2021-07-07 20:48:30 GMT)
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I suggest:
'The sentence is too open ended and should be reworded. The terms "other diseases" and "connected with the investigational drug or your illness" are not specific enough.'
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Note added at 4 hrs (2021-07-07 20:49:14 GMT)
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Sorry, 'still too open ended'.
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Note added at 4 hrs (2021-07-07 20:48:30 GMT)
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I suggest:
'The sentence is too open ended and should be reworded. The terms "other diseases" and "connected with the investigational drug or your illness" are not specific enough.'
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Note added at 4 hrs (2021-07-07 20:49:14 GMT)
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Sorry, 'still too open ended'.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Kim Metzger
16 mins
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agree |
Ramey Rieger (X)
: clear as fog.
24 mins
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agree |
Barbara Schmidt, M.A. (X)
1 hr
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agree |
Susan Starling
: Not enough content, even with the full sentence. We'd need to see how the sentence they're referring to here is composed. Do you have that as well?
3 hrs
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Thanks. I think we have more than enough context with the full sentence
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agree |
David Hollywood
: "too vague" gets my vote
9 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
4 hrs
relevant demarcation/delimitation
The key word here is Spielraum because it leads to a clear interpretation of Eingrenzung as the thing, the lack of which, is causing this too much Spielraum or leeway - noch zu viel Spielraum.
"andere Krankheiten" and"die nicht mit dem Prüfpräparat oder Ihrer Erkrankung in Verbindung stehen" are things (Angaben - statements/details/specifications) that would potentially have been able to reduce the Spielraum or scope or leeway to an acceptable or manageable level. But unfortunately in this case these do not provide such help because they are not relevant enough as elements of demarcation or delimitation.
Let me know if you need more explanation.
"andere Krankheiten" and"die nicht mit dem Prüfpräparat oder Ihrer Erkrankung in Verbindung stehen" are things (Angaben - statements/details/specifications) that would potentially have been able to reduce the Spielraum or scope or leeway to an acceptable or manageable level. But unfortunately in this case these do not provide such help because they are not relevant enough as elements of demarcation or delimitation.
Let me know if you need more explanation.
Reference:
https://context.reverso.net/traduction/allemand-francais/Eingrenzung
https://www.linguee.com/english-german/search?source=auto&query=angaben
+1
6 hrs
appropriate specificity
..fails to/doesn't provide the appropriate specificity.
As pompous as the German. Maybe that's what's required here.
On another note:
Congratulations to all English football fans. They deserved to go through against Denmark. But I wish it hadn't happened because of a Schwalbe.
As pompous as the German. Maybe that's what's required here.
On another note:
Congratulations to all English football fans. They deserved to go through against Denmark. But I wish it hadn't happened because of a Schwalbe.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Adrian MM.
: with the idea of specific 'narrowing' and also with the 'eingeübte Schwalbe' > the usual ducking and diving specific to gamesmanship or, rather, 'gameboyship'.
11 hrs
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neutral |
Barbara Schmidt, M.A. (X)
: Adrian: is it Friday afternoon already?
16 hrs
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It probably is if you're an English football fan
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15 hrs
German term (edited):
dies ist keine entsprechende Eingrenzung
this is no adequate distinction // identification // differentiation
If this is about a medical study, it may have to do with identifying/describing the symptoms to be studied as opposed to other symptoms that have nothing to do with the study itself and are to be disregarded.
In healthcare, a differential diagnosis ... involves distinguishing a particular disease or condition from others that present with similar clinical features. Differential diagnostic procedures are used by clinicians to diagnose the specific disease in a patient...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Differential_diagnosis
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or
... this does not adequately distinguish this disease from other diseases...
... is no adequate differential diagnosis
In healthcare, a differential diagnosis ... involves distinguishing a particular disease or condition from others that present with similar clinical features. Differential diagnostic procedures are used by clinicians to diagnose the specific disease in a patient...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Differential_diagnosis
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or
... this does not adequately distinguish this disease from other diseases...
... is no adequate differential diagnosis
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