French term
United Kingdom
www.lingocraft.co.uk
Native in: English (Variants: Irish, Singaporean, UK, South African, British, Scottish) 
Works in: French to English, Italian to English, Romanian to English, and 2 more.
de la protection juridique, le contenu de l'offre
Les tarifs du coffre fort numerique, de la protection juridique, le contenu de l'offre "essentiel", evolueront de nouveau au 01/01/2019. Les conditions tarifaires sont visibles sur www.occitaine.banquepopulaire.fr/tarifs et reglementation/tarifs particuliers
......obviously I have a basic knowledge of the meaning of these phrases, but I think I must be reading this incorrectly as I cannot find a way to structure it in English, or to join the phrases up correctly. Perhaps I have missed the gist of the paragraph???
Feb 2, 2019 18:47: Rachel Fell changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"
Feb 2, 2019 23:45: Yolanda Broad changed "Term asked" from "...de la protection juridique, le contenu de l\\\'offre " to "de la protection juridique, le contenu de l\'offre "
Non-PRO (3): mchd, Yvonne Gallagher, Rachel Fell
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Proposed translations
Venezuela
freelance translator
Native in: English 
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish, German to English, and 3 more.
your digital safe, your legal protection as well as the contents of our "essential" BPOC Offers
/ rates and regulations / private banking rates
partial source excerpt:
English website - Banque Populaire Occitane
https://www.occitane.banquepopulaire.fr/.../english-website....
BPOC Offers
6.An (optional) legal protection cover and assistance if you find yourself in a dispute with neighbours/tax offices/NHS/traffic accident/purchase of goods/employment …(except divorce, building work cover by the artisan’s 10 years guarantee or if you were the perpetrator of the crime/fraud).
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@Lara
Let us interactively brainstorm this
Blending your and my attempts with your grammatical element or punctuation, let me have your new input to see if there is anything additional that may be contributed from here
In short, how would rewrite this attempt so that it reads correctly?
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As to the links you mention, there is only mentioned from here:
English website - Banque Populaire Occitane
https://www.occitane.banquepopulaire.fr/.../english-website....
Descriptif long. Hello, our English website is available. ... BPOC Offers. BPOC Offers · En savoir plus. House insurance. A policy for everyone · En savoir plus ...
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Sorry:
As to the links you mention, there is only one single one mentioned from here:
| But that does not read correctly as there seems to be a grammatical element or punctuation missing, and your links do not work. |
| I am looking for a way to structure the phrases correctly. |
| But this English text you have found cannot be rewritten, as I don't think anybody knows what it means. |
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Daryo
: proposed translation mostly OK, but not you explanations - "Our terms and conditions for current rates" is pure nonsense, and doesn't correspond to the ST anyway.
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philgoddard
: I think Tony is probably right and there's an implied "et". But you could express this much more concisely: 'Your digital safe, legal cover, and "essential" services'.
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Thanks!
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GILLES MEUNIER
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The rates for your digital safe and your legal protection, as well as the content of our "essential"
can be expanded for easier understanding as:
(1) Les tarifs du coffre fort numérique (2) Les tarifs de la protection juridique (3) le contenu de l'offre "essentielle" évolueront de nouveau au 01/01/2019
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The rates for your digital safe and your legal protection, as well as the description/content of our "essential" (core?) offer, will be evolving again on the 1st of January 2019.
Because "évoluer" is not only about rates, but also about the content of this "essential" offer (or "essentials" ? I vaguely remember a UK bank offering a type of account called "Essentials") you can't use "increase".The same "evolving" or "changing/modifying/.." could do.
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GILLES MEUNIER
: Relisez, vous êtes dans le contresens
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Yeah, sure thing ...
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Reference comments
Venezuela
freelance translator
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish, German to English, and 3 more.
English website - Banque Populaire Occitane / Hello, our English website is available
https://www.occitane.banquepopulaire.fr/.../english-website....
Ouvrir un compte · Accueil > Nous contacter > English website ... Descriptif long. Hello, our English website is available. ... A policy for everyone · En savoir plus ...
| Thanks, but I cannot find this particular sentence. |
Discussion
"Les tarifs du ... [et] de la protection juridique, [ainsi que] le contenu ..., evolueront de nouveau au 01/01/2019."
This tendency in FR to leave out a few key 'et' is sometimes a little hampering!
Ah, I see Daryo types faster than I !
A-1 du coffre fort numérique,
A-2 de la protection juridique,
B le contenu de l'offre "essentiel",
évolueront de nouveau au 01/01/2019.
3 sujets du verbe "évoluer":
1- Les tarifs du coffre fort numérique
2- Les tarifs la protection juridique,
3- le contenu de l'offre "essentiel"
But I am not sure if I have read the structure properly....?
Well I would assume this to be a list right? i.e. All the three first phrases are the subject of "evolueront de nouveau"