17:06 Apr 29, 2002 |
Ukrainian to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary | |||||
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| Selected response from: Yuri Geifman Canada Local time: 08:12 | ||||
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There were made the conclusions about unsolved problems and defects in guarranteeing Explanation: the physical security of objects |
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Conclusions were drawn with respect to the unsolved Explanation: problems and shortcomings in the physical protection of the site (security, etc.) - context would help to nail it down exactly. |
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Conclusions were made in regards to unsolved problems and shortcomings in the provisionining Explanation: "buli zrobleni visnovki schodo nevirishenix problem ta nedolikiv u zabespechenni .= Conclusions were made in regards to unsolved problems and shortcomings in the provisionining.... I would stress that the subject matter which is not indicated may change the word "provisioning" to "insuring".. |
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Conclusions were drawn with respect to unresolved issues and existing shortcomings in (1)securing Explanation: site shields; (2) safegurading sites |
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The... (Board or Committe, or whoever)... Explanation: I suggest that you find the subject for this sentence in the paragraph. In this case the whole phrase may sound much better. For instance, something like this: The... (Board or Committe, or whoever)has/ve pointed out the problems yet to be solved and the flaws of the existing system of physical protection ... Other synonyms to be considered: drawbacks/ shortcomings / defects / failures / weak points -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-04-29 21:03:39 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I am not sure about the \'physical protection\'. I have found it in the multitran, but the nuclear energy is not one of my areas of expertise. Other colleagues will certainly suggest a better choice of words for this part. |
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