volverse harina

English translation: was smashed

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Spanish term or phrase:volverse harina
English translation:was smashed
Entered by: Lisa McCarthy

11:18 Apr 4, 2014
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Spanish term or phrase: volverse harina
Hi, here is the section where this phrase is found:

"Cayó como un crucificado, la diestra con la botella de ron apuntando al firmamento, la siniestra dirigida al suelo para frenar el golpe. La botella se salvó, pero la muñeca izquierda se le volvió harina. Le pareció oír el 'crac' y se quedó esperando el dolor."

For a bit of context, the protagonist had been drinking and singing on a table before this happened. The language is quite informal throughout.

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Animus
United Kingdom
Local time: 14:16
was smashed
Explanation:
Another option:

Knitting Through It: Inspiring Stories for Times of Trouble
books.google.com/books?isbn=1610600584
Lela Nargi - 2008 - ‎Crafts & Hobbies
Twenty-four hours and one marathon surgery later, I was ensconced in my bed with a makeshift cast. My wrist was smashed into forty pieces, and my elbow was ...

Miseries of the Moose - SI.com
sportsillustrated.cnn.com/.../index.htm‎
Sports Illustrated Media Franchise
Last July, his left wrist was smashed when he collided with the base runner while reaching for a throw from third base. The injury put him out for the season.

100 Things Hoosiers Fans Should Know and Do Before They Die
books.google.com/books?isbn=1623680247
Stan Sutton - 2012 - ‎SPORTS & RECREATION
His left wrist was smashed, and bones adjoining his thumb were fractured. Philpott called for someone to apply pressure to Recker's neck because the chance of ...

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Or .. HIS WRIST CRUMBLED (UNDERNEATH/BENEATH HIM/UNDER HIS WEIGHT) ' - which I think I prefer actually

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Note added at 39 minutos (2014-04-04 11:57:53 GMT)
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Another idea:

SPLINTERED INTO PIECES

For One Last Breath, a sanctuary fanfic | FanFiction
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7470959/.../For-One-Last-Bre...
FanFiction.Net
Oct 16, 2011 - In a simple movement he jerked her hand around and the bone in her wrist splintered with audible noise and she felt her entire body go weak, ...

A faint crackling noise filled the air as his wrist splintered, but Cammie ignored the sound. Instead, she turned to Zach, and with flashing eyes she uttered two ..
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Lisa McCarthy
Spain
Local time: 15:16
Grading comment
I went for smashed on its own, but this was the answer I chose so thank you!
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Summary of answers provided
4 +3was smashed
Lisa McCarthy
4 +2was pulverised
Carol Gullidge
4 +1turned to dust beneath his weight
James Peel
5give way
Paul García
5bent away dangerously
Anna Heath
4to be shattered
Charles Davis
4ruined/crushed
Andres Fekete
3Cave in
peter jackson
3crumbled
Rebecca Hendry


  

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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
to be shattered


Explanation:
"Was shattered" for "se le volvió harina", in your context. I think "se volvió harina" means it was broken into tiny pieces: a rather dramatic way of saying that he broke his wrist, hence the "crac".

"harina
hacer ~ algo.
1. loc. verb. Hacerlo añicos."
http://lema.rae.es/drae/?val=harina

Charles Davis
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10 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
turned to dust beneath his weight


Explanation:
Basically it means that his wrist gave way beneath him - "becoming flour". You can be as creative as you like - this is just my offering!

James Peel
United Kingdom
Local time: 14:16
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agree  Julie Thurston
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12 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
was smashed


Explanation:
Another option:

Knitting Through It: Inspiring Stories for Times of Trouble
books.google.com/books?isbn=1610600584
Lela Nargi - 2008 - ‎Crafts & Hobbies
Twenty-four hours and one marathon surgery later, I was ensconced in my bed with a makeshift cast. My wrist was smashed into forty pieces, and my elbow was ...

Miseries of the Moose - SI.com
sportsillustrated.cnn.com/.../index.htm‎
Sports Illustrated Media Franchise
Last July, his left wrist was smashed when he collided with the base runner while reaching for a throw from third base. The injury put him out for the season.

100 Things Hoosiers Fans Should Know and Do Before They Die
books.google.com/books?isbn=1623680247
Stan Sutton - 2012 - ‎SPORTS & RECREATION
His left wrist was smashed, and bones adjoining his thumb were fractured. Philpott called for someone to apply pressure to Recker's neck because the chance of ...

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Note added at 14 minutos (2014-04-04 11:32:26 GMT)
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Or .. HIS WRIST CRUMBLED (UNDERNEATH/BENEATH HIM/UNDER HIS WEIGHT) ' - which I think I prefer actually

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Note added at 39 minutos (2014-04-04 11:57:53 GMT)
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Another idea:

SPLINTERED INTO PIECES

For One Last Breath, a sanctuary fanfic | FanFiction
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7470959/.../For-One-Last-Bre...
FanFiction.Net
Oct 16, 2011 - In a simple movement he jerked her hand around and the bone in her wrist splintered with audible noise and she felt her entire body go weak, ...

A faint crackling noise filled the air as his wrist splintered, but Cammie ignored the sound. Instead, she turned to Zach, and with flashing eyes she uttered two ..

Lisa McCarthy
Spain
Local time: 15:16
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 104
Grading comment
I went for smashed on its own, but this was the answer I chose so thank you!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Rebecca Hendry: Smashed, crumbled, splintered, all nice options.
2 hrs
  -> Thansk, Rebecca :)

agree  Phoenix III
2 hrs
  -> Thanks!

agree  Wendy Streitparth: "Smashed to smithereens" came instantly to mind.
2 hrs
  -> Thanks, Wendy - 'smithereens' is a great word ;-)
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43 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
give way


Explanation:
Haven't heard this phrase for a while, though it was common enough... It means to fail to sustain stress, was used idiomatically...

Paul García
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Cave in


Explanation:
http://www.generalforum.com/general/broken-bones-82220-page3...

peter jackson
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se le volvió harina
was pulverised


Explanation:
clearly an exaggeration, but no more so than "… harina". And there is a metaphorical connection between pulverised (turned to powder/dust) and flour

Carol Gullidge
United Kingdom
Local time: 14:16
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Sp-EnTranslator
8 hrs
  -> thanks Claudia!

agree  Collin Stewart: Yeah I really like the metaphorical connection between pulverised and polvo/harina.
3 days 7 hrs
  -> thanks Collin :)
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
ruined/crushed


Explanation:
Here are a couple more suggestions for you.
ru·in (ro̅o̅′ĭn)
n.
1. Total destruction or disintegration, either physical, moral, social, or economic.
2. A cause of total destruction.

Andres Fekete
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Local time: 10:16
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
crumbled


Explanation:
Lots of good suggestions, here's another one to add to the list. It's not what I'd usually use for a bone breaking, but it seems to fit with the flour imagery of the original.

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Oops just saw Lisa has actually already suggested this in her note above. Sorry!

Rebecca Hendry
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3 days 9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
bent away dangerously


Explanation:
Here's another option.

Think about how it feels when you break your wrist, or if you're so drunk that you can't actually control your extremities any more. This is literature, so your translation will vary depending on the style you've decided upon, but some of these answers are too straight-forward.

"Bending away" transmits the expressive meaning of the word (becoming flour) much more than other answers, and yes, "giving way" is another alternative. I'll assume that we should play with the English language and have some fun with the text. Let us know what you settle for!

I've broken my wrist myself, and you have to hold it up afterwards!

Anna Heath
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