Jun 26, 2016 16:00
7 yrs ago
Chinese term

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Gang Li (asker) Jul 1, 2016:
Please follow the etiquettes in our language, acti 多謝各位的熱烈回應!這好像是中國大陸的一條標語。原有的英譯是「Talk and Behave politely to be civilized people」。我覺得有些不妥,經與他人討論,認為可以譯成「Be civil and civilized」。但我覺得好玩,於是發到這裡大家討論。同時我與另一位翻譯有過私下討論,他的翻譯是「Follow the etiquettes of a civil society in our language, our action, and our conduct」。此外,他認為「Be civil and civilized」過於居高臨下,有教訓人的感覺,容易引起讀者的不快。我們討論的結果是改為「Please follow the etiquettes in our language, action, and conduct」。

在我們這裡提出的幾個選擇當中,我個人最喜歡Bruce Guo的「Decent speech, Decent behaviour, Decent people」。

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Decent speech, Decent behaviour, Decent people

这里的文明实为得体,言语得体、行为得体、为人得体。

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Note added at 3天2小时 (2016-06-29 18:41:03 GMT)
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update:
Polite Words, Decent Behaviour, Civilised Person!
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just my hits for help

Say yes for civilization, do something civilized, civilized people do! - I would say this

but found these:

That civilization, then, do something civilized, civilized people do!

http://www.zaixian-fanyi.com/fan_yi_13552851

http://www.zaixian-fanyi.com/fan_yi_2536283

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Note added at 1 hr (2016-06-26 17:31:08 GMT)
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说文明话、办文明事、做文明人!的翻译是: 什么意思? 中文翻译英文 ...
www.zaixian-fanyi.com/fan_yi_2536283

求翻译:说文明话、办文明事、做文明人! ... That civilization, then, do something civilized, civilized people do! ... Said civilization, civilization, do civilized people!
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Speak in a civilized manner, do things in a civilized fashion, be a civilized person.

Speak in a civilized manner, do things in a civilized fashion, be a civilized person.

Translation from Chapter 5 "Building Civilised Cities" by Carolyn Cartier in China Story Yearbook 2013 Civilising China ed. Geremie R. Barmé and Jeremy Goldkorn, pp.266
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agree Erzsébet Czopyk : I like this solution very much.
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1 day 9 hrs

见下

Speak, act, and behave like a true person with ethics.

Or loosely translated as:

Speak, act, and behave like a true Samaritan

供参考
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"Speak Civilly, Act Civilly and Be a Civilized Person"

The slogan is quoted in the book New Mentalities of Government in China, page 66, edited by David Bray and Elaine Jeffreys, with the translation: "Speak Civilly, Act Civilly, Be a Civilized Person and Build a Civilized City"(说文明话,办文明事,做文明人,创文明城).
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