Aug 12, 2014 14:17
9 yrs ago
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English term
Russian Federation
20+ Translated Books Published in Moscow
Native in: Russian (Variants: Moscow, Standard-Russia)
Works in: English to Russian, Italian to Russian, Spanish to Russian, and 2 more.
visual enjoyment
English
Marketing
Advertising / Public Relations
an Ad about Screen Protection for Smartphones and Other Devices
Excellent screen transparency and color rendering maximize your visual enjoyment.
Does "visual enjoyment" sound good English?
My Russian client (not linguist) sent me his own translation of this ad for validation.
Thank you in advance for your help!
Regards,
Natalia
Does "visual enjoyment" sound good English?
My Russian client (not linguist) sent me his own translation of this ad for validation.
Thank you in advance for your help!
Regards,
Natalia
Responses
+9
46 mins
Yvonne Gallagher
Ireland
Ireland
Native in English
&
English
Works in field
Ireland
right word, right place. everytime
Native in: English (Variants: US, Canadian, Irish, UK) 
Works in: French to English, Spanish to English, English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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12
Selected
(optimum) visual enjoyment
I think what you have is perfectly fine and is very widely used
or maximum/exquisite visual enjoyment etc
http://www.pompmall.com/pomp-c6-smartphone-android-4-2-mtk65...
or
"
Beautiful large 5.7-inch Full HD Super AMOLED display maximizes your visual enjoyment"
http://www.au.kddi.com/english/mobile/product/smartphone/scl...
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Note added at 1 hr (2014-08-12 15:42:57 GMT)
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visual pleasure
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Note added at 6 hrs (2014-08-12 20:57:42 GMT)
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BTW iff ad is for UK it should be "coloUr" not "color"
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Note added at 5 days (2014-08-17 16:30:15 GMT) Post-grading
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Glad to have helped. I honestly think this is best here. "provide a feast for the eyes" would mean, for me, "give you a lot of stuff to look at" so slightly different meaning.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks!"
+3
1 min
Andrew Bramhall
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
&
English
United Kingdom
Flair and accuracy tailored to your text
Native in: English 
Works in: Spanish to English, German to English
(provide) a feast for the eyes
Excellent screen transparency and color rendering provide a feast for the eyes (maximize your visual enjoyment)
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Note added at 7 mins (2014-08-12 14:24:35 GMT)
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Yes, but a bit mundane, and lacking style,in my opinion; still, completely correct though;
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Note added at 7 mins (2014-08-12 14:24:35 GMT)
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Yes, but a bit mundane, and lacking style,in my opinion; still, completely correct though;
Note from asker:
| Thank you, Oliver. And is "visual enjoyment" a possible version too? |
| No doubt it is. I like your version. |
| Thank you, Oliver. I personally love your version. It`s my client who insisted on his own version. But I`ll surely give you your points next time! Regards. |
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Trudy Peters
: I like visual enjoyment
39 mins
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Thanks
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| neutral |
Yvonne Gallagher
: "a feast for the eyes" is not quite the same thing
45 mins
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Thanks
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| agree |
Adela Porumbel
1 hr
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Thanks
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| agree |
Cilian O'Tuama
: it works here
1 day 7 hrs
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+1
5 hrs
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