Mar 16, 2014 19:40
10 yrs ago
Italian term

si affina

Italian to English Art/Literary Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting music/mime
Thanks :) This is just a first pass: honed??!!!
Dall'inizio della collaborazione con la regista attrice-perfomer Eloisa Gatto, la sua ricerca si affina maggiormente con l'inserimento dei rumori dal vivo e con l'esplorazione di nuovi incontri tra musica e scena, coadiuvati in gran parte dallo studio del mimo corporeo astratto di Etienne Decroux.

From the beginning of his collaboration with the director, actress-performer Eloisa Gatto, his research honed mainly with the introduction of live sounds and with the exploration of new encounters between music and the stage, assisted in great part by the study of Etienne Decroux's abstract corporeal mime.

Discussion

stephanie Foulkes (asker) Mar 19, 2014:
Hi Janice, this is a CV of a sound artist-musician who works with his partner, the mime Eloisa Gatto. So yes there are live sounds.
Janice Giffin Mar 16, 2014:
@Stephanie Who is the other person in the collaboration? Is it a man (his research)? Are live sounds included in the research or the performance? I'm a little puzzled.
Denise DeVries Mar 16, 2014:
passive tense "honed" sounds good, but it needs to be "his research was honed" or "he honed his research."

Proposed translations

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is enhanced

I think this could be a valid possibility. See my comment in the discussion...
Example sentence:

"in which the excitement of research is enhanced by inspired teaching and enthusiastic learning."

An actor’s performance is enhanced by: an ability to put personal skills like imagination, emotional honesty and empathy at the service of a creative process

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3 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "I put he enhanced his research. Thanks"
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improves, develops

A proposal
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3 hrs

is refined

I would say his/her search is refined or he/she refined..

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Note added at 3 hrs (2014-03-16 23:06:57 GMT)
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further refined by
Peer comment(s):

agree Michael Korovkin
7 hrs
thank you!
agree Sarah Thompson
10 hrs
thank you!
neutral Lara Barnett : I think this has a slightly incorrect nuance here.
3 days 23 hrs
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4 days

honed

"His research was honed mainly on.."

I get the sense that using "honed" in some way, maybe by restructuring the phrase if it sounds odd, conforms more to the sense and nuance of the source term.

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"Publishing on a variety of topics in the interim, Anderson HONED HIS RESEARCH ON Arapaho art into a focused project by about 2004, "when I began visiting various museums and archives, as well as doing online research of museum collection databases that only became available at that time," he says."
https://www.hws.edu/dailyupdate/NewsDetails.aspx?aid=17487
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